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The chiffon of my slipdressSlithers up my thighsAs ICross and uncross my legsRepetitivelyAnxiouslyTrying to repressThe acheThat radiatesFrom the altarThat you knelt before And praised meI conjure...
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So romantic!... And I'm a hopeless romanticWow. I gotta catch my breath....This captures and keeps the reader... and pays off well in the last line...Greatness!- Andrew
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It is soooooo romantic... and the confirmation at the end... is wonderfulrb
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Andrew...A hopeless romantic, huh? Aren't we all. Good to be felt on this piece.Serenity...Brandi"Your friend is your needs answered"- Kahlil Gibran
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Thank you, RB. Your words mean a lot.Serenity...Brandi"Your friend is your needs answered"- Kahlil Gibran
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I truly felt this piece, dear poetess!!Dang...talk about leaving a yearning ache...Well done!!!Dark Poetry DragonMasterPanegyrize your poetry atSoulStarz Galaxy
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A yearning ache...couldn't have said it better myself. Thank you for your response on this piece.Serenity...Brandi"Your friend is your needs answered"- Kahlil Gibran
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BrandiWonderful verse you have left hereI especially enjoyed yourtake on this subjectERik
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Takes a special kind of man to have me reliving certain moments. Thanks, ERik.Serenity...Brandi"Your friend is your needs answered"- Kahlil Gibran
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no...I see this as HOPEFULLY romantic...for I think that if you live a poetic life, the glass is supposed to be half full.......it is a lovely read
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Hopefully romantic? Love it! Thanks. And thanks for the read!Serenity...Brandi"Your friend is your needs answered"- Kahlil Gibran
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A truly Romantic write!thesoulfulpoet*We cannot live our lives aloneFor other lives we touch;They're either strengthened by our own,Or weakened just as much Unknownthesoulfulpoet
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First, let me say that I'm loving the Royo piece you're using. I'm also somewhat of a fan of Boris Vallejo. Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read me.Serenity...Brandi"Your...
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